Great + Bad + Bad = Not so good
3 things to rate a game by are graphics, story, and most importantly gameplay.
While its a great sign to see a game with a worthwhile story on newgrounds...finally, the gameplay of this is quite slow and fiddly. While graphics are of least importance, the blockiness is a particular style that im not sure is 100% appropriate for this gameplay style. +8 for story, -3 for gameplay, -1 for graphics.
Keep it up though! U have the potential for a great game in you!
Really fun, Really addictive, and Really easy!
I reckon you should make this for iPhone, it was made for it!
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